和谐英语

六级改错题实战训练——(1)

2007-10-31来源:
Directions: This part consists of one passage. In each passage there are altogether 10 mistakes, one in each numbered line. You may have to change word, add a word or delete(删去) a word. If you change a word, cross it out and write correct word in the corresponding blank. If you add a word, put an insertion mark (∧) in the right place and write the missing word in the blank. If you delete a word, cross it out and put a slash (/) in the blank.
Few football grounds boast a more prestigious address than the Bernabeu, lies as it does on the 1. ____
Castellana,the threelining highway that runs through 2.____the heart of Madrid. As Real date back to 1902, when the Sociedad 3. ____ Madrid Football Club was formed, it was not until 1920 when the club was granted permission to use the 4. ____Real (royal) prefix. Work began on the currentstadium in October 1944. The land had been purchasedon three million pesetas; construction costs totalled a 5. ____ further 38 million, a staggered sum for the time. The 6. ____ cost of the new stadium led to claims, never proving, 7. _____ that Real had received financial aid from General Franco’s government. Under Bernabeu’s patronage, Real Madrid became the greatest club side ever, won 8. ____ the European Champions Cup a record five times in a row between 1956 and 1960, a remarkable feat that is unlikely to be challenged. Madrid lies, quite literally, at the heart ofSpain.This is no small coincidence that the capital’s 9. ____leading football club is seen like a symbol of all 10. ____ things Spanish, just as FC Barcelona is a beacon forthe independent Catalan spirit.
答案部分
1.【参考答案】将lies改为lying。
【参考译文】 没有别的体育场位置能与伯纳贝乌体育场位置相媲美了,它位于卡斯特拉纳,位于穿越马德里市中心这条高速公路的三叉路口。
【试题分析】 本题辨析主句与分词状语关系的误用。
【详细解答】 lies as it does on the Castellana ,虽然主语应该是Bernabeu,但由于前面Few football grounds boast a more prestigious address than the Bernabeu是比较级的句子,而且比较对象很明确:是Few football grounds 与the Bernabeu,而lies 的误用,导致了句子结构的混乱。鉴于lies as it does…是对the B ernabeu的补充说明,故将lies改为lying,使之与后面的句子变成状语,就解决了问题。
2.【参考答案】将threelining改为threelined。
【参考译文】 译文同上句。
【试题分析】 本题辨析分词作定语时的误用。
【详细解答】 threelining与其修饰词highway的逻辑关系是被动的。而现在分词往往是与其修饰词的关系是主动的。因此,将threelining改为threelined。
3.【参考答案】将as改为Though。
【参考译文】 尽管皇家马德里队的历史可追溯到1902年索西达德马里足球俱乐部队成立之时,但是直到1920年,俱乐部才被允许在其名字之前 冠以“皇家”二字。
【试题分析】 本题辨析连接词的误用。
【详细解答】 Real date back to 1920与it was not until 1920 that the club was granted permission to use the Realprefix之间的逻辑关系应是转折关系,而as的误用导致了关系的混乱改为表示转折的Though/Although。
4.【参考答案】将when改为that。
【参考译文】 译文同上句。
【试题分析】 本题辨析连接词的误用。
【详细解答】 强调句与定语从句的区别主要有两点:引导词与引导词前后的句子的结构。强调句的连词除了强调人可以是who 以外,都用that。另外一点,强调句前半部分是“It is…”,句意不完整,that后面的部分也不完整,只有将It is …that中间的成分移到后面才完整。本句是强调句,而不是定语从句,故when属误用,须将when改为that。
5.【参考答案】将on改为for。
【参考译文】 购买体育场地皮花去300万比赛塔,建造费用总共达3800万比赛塔。
【试题分析】 本题辨析介词的误用。
【详细解答】 介词的作用在英语中的作用是不容忽视的,每一个介词都有其独特的用途。on除了表示时间,空间位置外,还可以表示“在……方面”,不表示花费多少钱。故句中on属误用,将之改为表示数目多少的介词“for”。
6.【参考答案】将staggered改为staggering。
【参考译文】 在当时,这是一笔令人惊愕的数目。
【试题分析】 本题辨析同源的形容词的误用。
【详细解答】 以“ed”结尾的形容词主语一般修饰人,表示“感到……的”,以“ing”结尾的形容词一般修饰非生命的“物”,表示“令人……的”,句中sum是staggered逻辑主语,故staggered属误用,将之改为staggering。
7.【参考答案】将proving改为proven。
【参考译文】 新建体育场的巨大耗资引起了许多传言,还说皇家马德里队曾接受过佛朗哥政府的资助,但从未得到证实。
【试题分析】 本题辨析做状语时,分词的误用。
【详细解答】 never proving是主句The cost of the new stadium led to claims的分词状语,proving的逻辑主语是that Real had received financial aid from General Franco’s government,在关系上与proven属被动,因此,proving属误用,改为proven。